Tuesday 15 January 2013

An Extract from My Newest Writing Project

An extract of what I started in November. It's only a first draft but I'm slowly getting into writing again! Good times!

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     Such arguments were common in the three months after Alexander’s capture. Striker was feeling lost and alone while Matt was nursing his damaged pride and resentment at having been cast aside by both Alexander and the Emissaries for the task of raising an army. Twist, as ever, was in the middle of them, acting more like Alexander than either one of them. Their mentor and role model, the one who should have been guiding them in all matters of the Flux for a long time to come, was gone; taken by the Flux Hunters at the same time as his sister, Julia.

     Dropping the photo to the floor, Striker stalked from the room, trying to suppress the emotions the arguments brought to the surface. Learning to read the echoes left in the Flux at times of intense emotional stress often pass unnoticed by Fluxlings. The more sensitive ones could feel some of the emotions from the echoes but during his journey, Striker learned to tune into those echoes and let them play out in his mind.

     It was tricky at first but once attuned it became be hard to block them out. That was one echo Striker did not want to relive.

     Back in the hall, another wave of the Flux passed through him. Instinctively, Striker turned to follow it and found himself staring at the front door. Hovering between him and the door was another wave of Flux forming into another humanoid shape. The purple outline showed it to be another echo of Striker and the wave of emotion flooded into him once more.

     An overwhelming sense of loneliness and sorrow identified it as the moment he left the safe house to begin his travels. There were no words here as the echo stood motionless before the door.

     It was the uncertainty of his decision to leave that was holding him back. Striker remembered this clearly. Time had shown him he wasn’t ready and the longer he stayed, the more frustrated he became. He had to stretch his wings and learn more about the Flux and what he could do with it. He desperately wanted Twist and Matt to go with him but Matt would call him a coward for running away. Twist wouldn’t, but the disappointment in her eyes would be there. Striker knew that for a fact.

     A creak from above spurred the echo into motion. It opened the door, which didn’t actually move in reality, stepped through and quietly closed it behind him.

    That should have been the end of it but the Flux was still invading his mind. The sense of loss grew and there was an edge of fear too. It was from his echo because Striker knew that he had instantly become preoccupied with where to go and how to get there.

     “Goodbye…”

     The word took him by surprise and he turned around again to follow the Flux to its source. Ignoring the kitchen, Striker turns to look up the stairs and sees the echo dissipate into the air again. It was a yellow outline. It was Twist. She was awake when he left. Was she waiting for him to ask her to join him? Or was she hoping he wouldn’t leave?

     The third question hit him even harder; did he even want to know the answer?

     As if on autopilot, Striker climbed the stairs to the first floor and stood on the landing with his eyes closed. He willed for another echo to manifest, or even replay the one he had just seen but the house remained still. Opening his eyes he could see all the doors on this level were closed bar the study and the bathroom. A part of him wanted to knock on Twist’s door, just in case she was still there but he picked up no trace of her Flux other than the echo.

     After a step towards the stairs to the second floor he stopped and turned to face the study. The door was slightly ajar but the dust on the floor told him the door hadn’t moved in months, maybe longer.

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